Writing Activity
Yesterday it was my birthday. I turned 11. My mum got me a new B.M.X. It is as bright as a star. It is bright orange. It goes as fast as a jet. My dad also came for my birthday. He got me some awesome shoes. They are as cool as a limacine. My mum got me some colourful clothes. They are as colourful as art. I also got some sour lollies. They were as sour as a lemon.
BY Casey
I really like your similes. They make the story a lot more interesting. Mrs Larsen
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